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artavaleha
05-24-2005, 06:28 PM
This my second gallery....
It is my second work. First already have accepted in a pair link of sheets
I, as artist, am interested with registration and colour decision of this page more.
Well who has desire can and about the contents to tell. One "HREN" I English poorly both read and I understand. So do not hesitate in expressions...

http://www.artavaleha.com/amateur_02/gallery02.html

Yahook
05-24-2005, 06:48 PM
First of all I can say - you should make thumbs manually if you want to make good gallery. Look at this thumb for example:

Thumb:
http://www.artavaleha.com/amateur_02/tp11.jpg
Original pic:
http://www.artavaleha.com/amateur_02/p11.jpg

The other error - you have very hard design - 57kb for the footer - too much as I think.

Yahook
05-24-2005, 08:11 PM
If you fix this errors - the gallery looks nice :wink:

Paco
05-24-2005, 08:15 PM
First: I am not sure if I did this before, but in the case I did not: Welcome to AWM artavaleha.

Now to your gallery:

I agree with Yahook on both of his points:

a). thumbnails should ALWAYS be done manually! Running a batch is fast, but the end result is not nice.

b). You need to optimise your gallery - the size (206KB) is too large.
01.jpg & 02.jpg should be reduced.

In addition:
c). Some of your thumbs are too large - I believe most TGPs want the thumbs to be less than 5KB (some of yours are 6).

d). Your HTML has a lot of redundant tags/code, such as alignment and dimensions (height & width).

I hope that helps you out.

meunknown
05-25-2005, 10:12 AM
ya think about optimization its 1st
and 2nd u need to work better with photos...
Girl in header too green and have bad quality
try to find tutorials how to make photo more quality..or something like this

artavaleha
05-25-2005, 07:50 PM
ya think about optimization its 1st
and 2nd u need to work better with photos...
Girl in header too green and have bad quality
try to find tutorials how to make photo more quality..or something like this


HI!
You have the right to the opinion it is the fact.
And you have an opportunity to adjust the monitor.
How to do good figures and colour to them I have an opportunity to learn you....
I ask to not have on me malicious I it only probably not absolutely correctly has understood you, and you me... Because I very badly speak on the English language

Yahook
05-25-2005, 07:56 PM
artavaleha, meunknown is a professional designer, he knows what he says ;-)

artavaleha
05-26-2005, 04:02 AM
Be or not to be.... what is a question&
You one apply for exclusive opinion?
Who I on yours? The sexual member?

Paco
05-26-2005, 03:28 PM
This my second gallery.... So do not hesitate in expressions...

? I am :-?
Please keep in mind we are merely trying to provide you with an honest opinion or "expression".

artavaleha
05-26-2005, 09:37 PM
I thank you!
But I have also my private(individual) opinion. Besides I the beginner in this business. But in drawing more than 20 years am engaged.
Can look my works if to you interestingly. It is all is made in Photoshop without application of a pencil, paper and scanner.
http://artavaleha.com/map/index.html
Successes to you

Yahook
05-26-2005, 10:12 PM
artavaleha, your design is good, the only thing I can say - it's too big in size by kilobites. You need to optimize it - that's all :wink:

Your thumbs look like you've dome them by some thumbnail creator - if you've done them by yourself - that's good :)

P.S. You have good art works - I like them :roll: But I don't like your design studio site - looks like newbie site - lots of pictures don't load, difficult navigation - I recommend you to change it. But sure if you like it you can leave it without any changes.

meunknown
05-26-2005, 11:36 PM
2artavaleha, do u remember topick name? :)
so if not - see again..
u should be some quiet, cuz u ask help so u got it.
if i not understand exacly something so sorry me

artavaleha
05-27-2005, 02:27 AM
Hi!
Tell, the exact address of page which was not loaded?
I have checked up all, at me all is loaded..!!!!!

http://www.artavaleha.com/creative/index.html

http://www.artavaleha.com/imagecre/05.jpg

artavaleha
05-27-2005, 02:41 AM
http://www.artavaleha.com/imagepost/02.jpg
Hi!
Tell, the exact address of page which was not loaded?
I have checked up all, at me all is loaded...
2artavaleha, do u remember topick name?

It not old work.
Also that you would know, I practically make all itself.

http://www.artavaleha.com/amateur_02/index.html

Yahook
05-27-2005, 09:27 AM
This pic is http://www.artavaleha.com/erotic/image/09m.jpg linked to http://www.planetpantyhose.com/cgi-bin/click.cgi?id=artavaleha :wink: I think this is not good idea

Yahook
05-27-2005, 09:28 AM
I like your works :cool: