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bert2000pt
02-22-2006, 05:51 PM
I have just received this mail:

"Thanks for submitting your site to FetishismExpert.com!
But unfortunately your site was declined.

Reason: I can not write descriptions for you every time you post. Please order professional descriptions if you do not know english."

Are you joking? :P

Description: White submissive male made to worship is sexy gorgeous black Mistress ass.
What's wrong with the description other than the "his" spelling mistake?
Would it be "mistress's ass"?

You know as well as I do that descriptions can't always be written in perfect English, as we have restricted number of characters to use.

Anyway, if you prefer that I don't submit my sites to your link list, just let me know and I will remove you from my list.

Bert
Yahook
02-22-2006, 08:44 PM
bert2000pt,

My english isn't perfect, but I think this structure is incorrect:
"made to worship is sexy".
Morphius
02-22-2006, 09:20 PM
I am not joking. Both of your short and long descriptions for the free site you have submitted are written in bad english. I have nothing against slang etc. but this is just grammatically wrong.
Morphius
02-22-2006, 09:26 PM
Ok I got it. If we put "his" not "is" then it would be fine.
You should understand that we review a LOT of sites daily and just can't dig in every mistake even if it this slight. Please resubmit.

Thank you.
Paco
02-22-2006, 09:27 PM
White submissive male made to worship is sexy gorgeous black Mistress ass.

I hope you guys do not mind if I add my 2-cents:

I believe there is a typo: made to worship HIS (the 'h' is missing).

Next, the ass belongs to, or is the property of, the Mistress, so it should be Mistresses - Mistress's is not proper or correct.

I, personally, would not use two of the same or similar words, to describe the model - sexy gorgeous is redundant.

Here is what I would write or use:

White submissive male is forced to worship his sexy Mistresses gorgeous black ass.


Just tying to help.
bert2000pt
02-23-2006, 12:12 AM
Right on Morphius

Obviously this has been some kind of misunderstanding.
Will re-submit the site and using Paco great suggestion but, to keep it under 75 letters:
"White submissive male forced to worship sexy Mistresses gorgeous black ass"

Thank you and thanks Paco

Bert :-)
Yahook
02-23-2006, 12:41 AM
bert2000pt, if you could write a longer description (> 75 letters), that would be even better ;-)
Paco
02-23-2006, 04:32 PM
bert2000pt, it is my pleasure and I am happy I could help.